Some great stories from Matthias and Layla using one of our pictures prompts this week. Matthias, I like the way you have included who and what is happening in your story and have used the word 'fresh' to describe the milk. Well done!
Layla, you have also included who and what and I like the words 'taste testing' you have used to describe what your characters are doing. Great job!
Matthias has also drawn different groups of circles to practise his subitising! Ka pai Matthias!
What fabulous writing, Matthias! I agree with you; strawberries and milk make a great healthy breakfast. I wonder whether you would add anything if it's for your breakfast?
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